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2012 3BoysProductions

1/12/2012

# 3

...ensuing combination could be affirming or rancorous, sweetening or souring based on the top note added from the first exchange inside the room.  Leaving was no less fraught with danger: his father’s eyes could flicker immediately from the glassy wet of sleep or delirium to a razor focus. Like a crocodile’s frozen maw luring prey into careless complacency, the old man’s face possessed the ability to shift from relaxed wax, calm and still with heavy damask cheeks, to instant ice, reddened with the fury of the repeatedly wronged.
Faron kept his eyes open just enough to catch any movement towards the door. Through the screen door haze of his eyelashes he watched his son tiptoe around the recliner, pressing his hands against his thighs to still the car keys and coins in his pockets. God how he wished he had the power to make Jack’s phone, always new and increasingly full of tiny things Faron did not understand nor care about, ring out loud the instant he slid his hand inside his pocket or held the phone inches from his face to see the settings in the shadowy room. He wanted to blink like Jeannie or wriggle his nose like the witch and then bark out with delight when Jack jumped startled, wide-eyed, fumbling to silence the phone. Sometimes Faron got so caught up in thinking it could happen just as he wished that his son would look back, forehead knitted, concerned at the spasms on his father’s face. He would cross quietly back to the chair and softly, slowly brush away the unseen hair or dust tickling the now calm, settled face. Faron played along, relaxed his eyebrows and did his best to express contentment in a long, slow exhale.
Jack moved on cat feet around the room, watching without appearing to study his father as he settled down.  Sometimes the old man spoke just as Jack thought he was finally asleep, carrying on their afternoon conversation or reliving an event from ten, twenty, thirty or more years ago and either way expecting the appropriate response no matter who, and when, he was talking to.  Jack had become well practiced in the generic reply, showing Faron he was listening without getting caught pretending to be someone he was not -- Goddamn hot in here sure we can’t crack a window? Just a sec Dad, I’ll let in a little breeze. You can’t open a window on a goddamn B-52! What the hell, trying to get us killed? Never put on a uniform one day in your life and now you’re telling me about U.S. of A. fighter planes?  Jack dusted shelf edges with his fingertips, straightened frames that didn’t need to be, stepped with care on the alert for empty cups, candy wrappers, a fallen cane, anything that might create noise on his way to the door.  Leaving before Dad was asleep, or worse, waking him when he really was, could splinter a good afternoon, send both men careening backwards out of their hard-won peace. After several trial and error disastrous endings Jack had honed his pre-door knock routine, preparing as a ________ for any possible problem. It’s not that he didn’t want to see his father, or wanted to turn on his heels to leave as soon as he walked in the door, but when he was ready to leave, or his father was ready for him to leave -- Well, I’m home, don’t you wish you were?, he really needed to leave.  He turned off his phone, put his keys in a different pocket, cracked his knuckles and did a few deep knee bends, slowly and thoroughly so no joints would pop and creak when he stood to leave. He used to take his shoes off and leave them outside the door but after his father noticed -- What are you, a mama-san? Why do you have to be so sneaky? and he lost a new pair of Nikes to Mrs. Fleeg down the hall (Really Mrs. Fleeg, you wear a size 12? They go nice with your housecoat and walker.) Jack simply wore his quietest shoes and hoped for the best.  Usually it worked, the two old rivals had wordlessly choreographed a truce, a  meeting of the picket line sentries, an acknowledgement of mutual love and need that more often than not sifted into afternoons of calm, ease, affirmation. Nonetheless, after every visit it was a relief to slide through the barely opened door and step back out into the hall, which despite the stale air and echos of winding down lives allowed Jack his first deep breath since knocking on his father’s door.

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